On Absence
When you are
not here
I feel
Dis-
joint-
ed
I need you
here
to share
The day's
gray
particulars.
Tags: Anniina's Poetry
not here
I feel
Dis-
joint-
ed
I need you
here
to share
The day's
gray
particulars.
Tags: Anniina's Poetry
posted by Anniina | 9:31 PM
6 Comments:
I loik it. I like poetry I can understand ^.^ (y'all remember i'm a WAR right?) ~.^
LOL! Silly Hume Warrior!
The spacing (and not the content -which rings a chord in me) reminds me the writing on the wall in the movie Taxi Driver (one of these days I get organized)...
Gee!
I have just read 'have you heard the woodlark sing'.
Very nice, it's just according to my taste :))) - hope you don't mind...
mind? :) I love it when people compliment my work. Thanks for your nice words!
Thanks for linking me.
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